Rate my song lyrics please !!!im 15 remember !!?

my feelings seep into your skin


my worries whirling deep within


all my emotions are in your heart


like another me or just another part


when we hug u make me feel alive


no where to run nowhere to hide


we shud show our love publicly


then reality clicks back so suddenly


that this all this is in my mind





chorus


willu ever no how i feel about you


will you ever no that my feelings are true


will you ever see whats right in front of you


will you ever no that i love you


i think you get the message now


well do you ??





verse2


do you even know there is more to this?


more to this friendship, deeper than this kiss?


its like my heart is cuffed to your wrist


every minute with you is such sweet bliss


everytime i look at you your eyes they tell


dont you worry boo, all is well


dont hesitate now, if your heart beats with mine


lets live our lives like where running out of time





chorusx2 to fade !!

Rate my song lyrics please !!!im 15 remember !!?
brilliant.


these are really good.


send me a clip of you singing, i think its brilliant.


remember me when your famous :)
Reply:ummmm..it sounds okay in a kind of cheesy way??


i dont know its really about what you think of the song...
Reply:they're okay....7 out of 10
Reply:Omg, that's pretty awesome!! I give a 9. Keep it up!

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