Have U heard these LYRICS??

what do U think?





How I wish I could surrender my soul;


Shed the clothes that become my skin;


See the liar that burns within my needing.


How I wish I'd chosen darkness from cold.


How I wish I had screamed out loud,


Instead I've found no meaning.





I guess it's time I run far, far away; find comfort in pain,


All pleasure's the same: it just keeps me from trouble.


Hides my true shape, like Dorian Gray.


I've heard what they say, but I'm not here for trouble.


It's more than just words: it's just tears and rain.





How I wish I could walk through the doors of my mind;


Hold memory close at hand,


Help me understand the years.


How I wish I could choose between Heaven and Hell.


How I wish I would save my soul.


I'm so cold from fear.





I guess it's time I run far, far away; find comfort in pain,


All pleasure's the same: it just keeps me from trouble.


Hides my true shape, like Dorian Gray.


I've heard what they say, but I'm not here for trouble.


Far, far away; find comfort in pain.


All pleasure's the same: it just keeps me from trouble.


It's more than just words: it's just tears and rain.

Have U heard these LYRICS??
How about this one





Every time I look at you,


baby, I see something new


That takes me higher than before


and makes me want you more


I don't wanna sleep tonight,


dreamin's just a waste of time


When I look at what my life's been comin' to


I'm all about lovin' you





You can take this world away


You're everything I am


Just read the lines upon my face


I'm all about lovin' you
Reply:no good rewrite it
Reply:nope sorry.
Reply:Yup, tears and rain by James blunt.


Excellent song, very emotional. Also check out his other song, " You are beautiful". It is equally as good, if not better.
Reply:Good, need a good melody to make it really good though.
Reply:No haven't they don't make any sense.
Reply:Ive never heard these lyrics but they sound good to me...need to hear the melody and of course the delivery is important. I dont like the Heaven and Hell reference...kind of boring...I think there needs to be a clear chorus between the verses and a bridge.
Reply:Yes it was in Tears And Rain (James Blunt)
Reply:Cool albumb James Blunt He has another song i can't remember but he is good
Reply:cool...serious question: did you write this or did you get it from a song?
Reply:This is what I was gonna say, thinking it was a love poem for someone....but then I read it.


1st response:


I havent read a word, but here's some advise. Never ask advise on something you wrote from the heart, addressed to someone you love. You know the person you wrote this for, and you know the state of mind you had a the time of writing it.





2nd response:


It seems like you are not happy with some choices in life. It seems like you are very unhappy about something. If you are happy and love life, then this is bad lyrics, if not, feel free to contact me if you want to chat.
Reply:no, i have not

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