Friday, November 20, 2009

Will you help me improve the lyrics i wrote?

i wrote it about a month ago,so..yeah..:








My life is broken into pieces


of glass shattered on the floor


There is no blood in my body


I can't live this anymore


I'm living this life depressingly


with no one caring about me


There's nothing in this house left to break


My heart is no longer beating





The pain,it goes on,life never stops


you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause


and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin


It's okay, but my future isn't





if only i could go back


and fix all of my mistakes


they've only brought me torture


and more lifeless fakes


have you ever wondered why


you have to live the way you do?


why you were stuck with this


mess that can't fix?





the pain, it goes on (...^^^)





so leave all of your anger and misery


can't you please?


i already have too much to deal with


it's too much stress on me


and why,


why do we break hearts?


why do we kill lives?


can't we all just live peacefully?


you only have one chance at life








i can take harsh comments,too.. i'm aware that it sucks lol

Will you help me improve the lyrics i wrote?
I would recommend removing the 'of' at the beginning of the second line. Try to rephrase or change around the fifth line, it's weak and could be as strong as your previous lines.





the last line of the second stanza, 'it's okay, but my future isn't' it doesn't flow...perhaps change the 'isn't' to 'is not.'





'mess that can't fix?' i'm assuming that you mistakingly left out the 'be' so it's ' a mess that can't be fixed?' it would sound better that way.





other than that, it's excellent. no harsh comments needed, it's great lyrics.





I enjoyed the read.





Gene
Reply:it's good
Reply:I really don't think it sucks. It's pretty good actually. I really don't have any suggestions. But good luck! =)
Reply:i think it's pretty good. i don't have any suggestions. good luck!! :) ♥
Reply:i just have to say that does NOT suck! i think it's a very good creation of yours :)





i think after "the pain, it goes on..." then repeat (well what seems to me to be the chorus) the part:





"The pain,it goes on,life never stops


you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause


and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin


It's okay, but my future isn't"





then continue onto the third verse :)





but hey that's just a suggestion, it's all up to you!





i really like it though. it does not suck! it is very very wonderfully written :)





*hugs*
Reply:No help required, i think you have made your point.


For your next one i would suggest a little less melancholy.


Life is like a cup of tea, it's how you make it!
Reply:That's really good. I don't know how you would change the lyrics. I am not really good with writing songs. Just one question though, is this a soft song or a fast paced song.
Reply:Thats nice
Reply:Wow this is really good!!! Wow
Reply:To me it's too depressing, i like songs which say your depressed but get better or something. but its good if you like that kind of stuff.
Reply:that's good
Reply:Better Than I Expected! I Can Relate To This In So MAny Ways! .......xxxx

alstroemeria

Do you know any of these lyrics?

I do, but i just want to see how many people do or don't:





1: "blinded by the silence of a thousand broken hearts, for crying out loud she screamed unto me..."





2: "crawling in my skin these word they will not heal fear is how i fall confusing what is real"





3: "remember when we never needed each other the best of friends like sister and brother"





4: "i'm a barbie girl in the barbie world" (easy one lol)





5: "when darkness turns to light it ends tonight"





just put who you think sings it, or the name of the song, or both. I'm hoping someone will get #3!

Do you know any of these lyrics?
1. Minority - Green Day


2. Crawling - Linkin Park


3. How Did I Fall In Love With You - Backstreet Boys


4. Barbie Girl - Aqua


5. All American Rejects - It Ends Tonight
Reply:1. Minority - Green Day


2. Crawling - Linkin park


3. ?


4. Barbie Girl - Aqua


5. ?
Reply:the second one is linkin park.crawling..
Reply:Green Day - Minority


Linkin Park - Crawling


Devotion - Fall In Love With You


MxPx/Aqua - Barbie Girl


All American Rejects - It Ends Tonight
Reply:Green Day- Minority


Linkin Park- crawling


Backstreet Boys!!!!-uhhhhh god. "how did i fall in love?" something like that. god, i need to get my BSB cd's out again. lol.





Aqua-Barbie Girl


All American Rejects- It ends tonight
Reply:number 2 is linkin park - crawling


number 4 is aqua - barbie girl


What do you think of these lyrics I wrote (a bit bloody, gorey, gross, twisted, dark but still kickass)?

Note:





I just barely got them copywrighted.





They are still kind of sloppy I havent gone through it and organized them quite yet. And it didn't take all that long to write either. But I think they rock so tell me what you think.





(Not yet titled)


I’m being eaten alive


But somehow survive


Every maggot inside of my heart


Chews and swallows and tears me apart


Blood still flows


And my heart beats to small black crows


Pecking at my skin


Gashes on every intestin


Opening wounds bleeding out ants


Crawling, looking for something


They think that their life is so sad


They are making me look bad


They do it cause it’s their stupid fad





Chorus


It’s too late to escape


In my dreams I will be raped


Trying to keep it together


Will only force me to surrender


I’m surprised there’s air in my lungs


And in my brain there’s still songs


And there’s love for me after all this wrong

What do you think of these lyrics I wrote (a bit bloody, gorey, gross, twisted, dark but still kickass)?
I like them.......and before I go any further......to the 'tard who ridiculed you AND the Misfits........what planet are u from? Do u not realize that the Misfits paved the way for all the bands that are here now? Do u not realize how HUGELY popular they are?!?!? I doubt your answer will last thru me posting my answer with all ur f bombs u dropped.....one a the trolls will be dropping a dime ( sux cause i want people to see me blastin ur response) Now back to ur question chick, REALLY cool song. Very deep, very morbid and VERY you if thats the way you feel. Thats what music is....expressing YOURSELF.....NOT someone else. If it touches someone or affects someone else then so much the better. But the focal point of music, poetry, etc etc etc is expressing YOURSELF........And it appears that you have done that. Lotsa bands that sing/write this type of music are loved and hated. You can't please everyone, so concentrate on pleasing yourself and expressing yourself thru words. Bands such as the Misfits, Rancid, The Sex Pistols, X Ray Spex and on and on and on paved the way for all these so called punk/goth bands of today. Marilyn Manson would never have been heard of if not for the likes of The Misfits.
Reply:Kinda scary.....
Reply:Allow me to answer this, as an amateur songwriter myself, of such notable songs as "******' Genocide" and "Destroy the Playground:" it sucks. What the hell? Are you trying to be Goth? The biggest Gothiest anthem ever went, "Bela Lugosi's dead/the bats have left the belltower/Bela Lugosi's dead." Gore and stuff doesn't mean you're a good songwriter. I mean, hey, the Misfits, kings of lousy, horror-influence songwriting, never went beyond "I want your skulls."





Please, stop trying to be cleverly shocking and write real music. Express yourself however the **** you want, just DON'T be cliched. And cliched is exactly what this song is; it has "silly middle-school Goth poetry written all over."
Reply:I like it.





I'm not sure why, but I picture it as an Evanescence or Flyleaf type song.





The lyrics don't exactly scream originality I'll admit, but taking the beaten path is all right when you are first starting out as a musician/writer.
Reply:They're better than anything I can write, but the subject matter is pathetic. Try listening to Bob Dylan...or John Lennon...or Neil Young...or Bruce Springsteen. Then try again.
Reply:hey, i like it.





and don't listen to every one else who says you're trying to hard to be goth or whatever, if that's how you feel, then write it. that's what i do, and sometimes it does come out a bit gorey and gross. but it just comes with the territory. you have to pioneer those noew routes, especially as a young song-writer.


but anyway, i like it a lot. like i think it's really good. especially the chorus, loved the chorus.





i'm seriously surprised, this is really good.
Reply:i like it





did it take a long time to write or no?
Reply:i like it it is good go with the title"truly pianed" if u wanna go with that or pick someone elses if u like,


it is a really good song and cant wait to hear the other parts.


What Do You Think About These Lyrics ????

now i'm of presenting age to be forgetting you some where downtown where are berleask queen may even ask my name as she sheds her skin i;m sitting and preparing to dace under the clubs pa the strip joints while i'm afraid that i'm exactlly where you'd you like me to be while i'm afraid tht i wouldnt be caught deead in this place i'm exactull where you like me you know make love and a lap dance ya your payin for love ya payin for love

What Do You Think About These Lyrics ????
Interesting, did you write this? What kind of music is it supposed ot be set to?


What do you think of my lyrics?

If you need me,


I am right here.


If you feel despaired,


Let me catch your tears.





I want to help,


With all of my heart.


But you push me away.


How am I supposed to start?





You are so beautiful,


If only you could see.


How perfect you are,


To me.





I am your friend,


And always will be.


I am here to help,


But what will happen if you won’t trust me?





If you need me,


I am right here.


I will hold you in my arms,


And chase away your fear.





You don’t see yourself clearly,


You only see what’s wrong.


I’ll be right here for you,


Even as you pull away from me, I sing this song.





You don’t realize,


That’s what is important is within.


I will protect you,


Until you are ready to stand in your own skin.





I will stay up all night with you,


All you need to do is ask.


I am here for you,


And I will help you battle your past.





If you need me,


I am here, and always will be.


I love you as you are,


When you are blind to your beauty, I will help you see.

What do you think of my lyrics?
It sucks, too long.
Reply:ok
Reply:Good lyrics!
Reply:It depends on the music. Cant be any worse then oh blah dee, oh blah dah life goes on.
Reply:Its quite long, but I do like it.
Reply:Just not sure about the first verse. Very nice though! I could never do something like that, I just don't have that talent. Glad I got to see yours though. Thanks!
Reply:its awesome!


i wouldnt be surprised if it went international!
Reply:I like them-





but, it seems to me as though you have to make up a line just to make it rhyme. My suggestion:





go to http://www.rhymezone.com and type in the word you need to rhyme it with, and I'm sure you will find that you can make stronger lyrics from that. I hope I helped, and I loved your lyrics! :)
Reply:Absolutely beautiful. :) Your poem really moved me. You are very talented. And i love your lyrics. Keep up the great work. :)
Reply:Cool!
Reply:well its obvious your the next up and coming song writer! Its just the meal part I don't care for, why don't you put, " Your emotions you don't need too seal" or something else.





from 1-10, i give a 9.0
Reply:long, but pretty good
Reply:A lot of people said it was really long, and yeah, it was pretty long, but it was really good. Don't stop writing!

primrose

What do you think about these lyrics I wrote?(black/death metal, Title:Kill Me Now)NOT FINISHED?

The walls of flame closing in/


Buried under miles of ****/


Gasping for air and breathing in toxin/


I drink my blood and eat my flesh to stay alive/


Scream until my throat rips open and I choke on blood/


Melodies of death how sweet they sound now/


Beg the Grim Reaper to take soul/


Agony in every inch of my being/


Kill me now please kill me now/


Beaten until I can’t feel the pain/


Scars from the whip’s lash still glow red/


Rip my mind into pieces and feed it to the wolves/


Display me in a cage so I can be taunted/


Animalistic thoughts are the only thing I have now/


Maggots greedily devour my entire soul/


Needles and blades break the skin daily/


Drowning in sorrowful memories/


Kill me now please kill me now/

What do you think about these lyrics I wrote?(black/death metal, Title:Kill Me Now)NOT FINISHED?
Every words that you write and make it to be lyrics is always interesting to me. I always love to read lyric, why ? Because it always come from the deep of your heart and your feeling. It is a poetry for me.


And my opinion your lyric is good for a death metal. Especially the gore metal. Cool bro.


What do you think about these lyrics?

brand new - the boy who blocked his own shot


If it makes you less sad, I will die by your hand. I hope you find out what you want. I already know what I am. And if it makes you less sad, we'll start talking again. And you can tell me how vile I already know that I am. I'll grow old and start acting my age. I'll be a brand new day in a life that you hate. A crown of gold. A heart that's harder than stone. And it hurts a whole lot, but it's missed when it's gone. Call me a safe bet. I'm betting I'm not. I'm glad that you can forgive. I'm only hoping as time goes, you can forget. If it makes you less sad, I'll move out of the state. You can keep to yourself. I'll keep out of your way. And if it makes you less sad, I'll take your pictures all down. Every picture you paint, I will paint myself out. It's cold as a tomb, and it's dark in your room, when I sneak to your bed to pour salt in your wounds. So call it quits or get a grip. Say you wanted a solution. You just wanted to be missed. Call me a safe bet. I'm betting I'm not. I'm glad that you can forgive.


I'm only hoping as time goes, you can forget... You are calm and reposed. Let your beauty unfold. Pale white, like the skin stretched over your bones. Spring keeps you ever close. You are second hand smoke. You are so fragile and thin. Standing trial for your sins. Holding onto yourself the best you can. You are the smell before rain. You are the blood in my veins. Call me a safe bet. I'm betting I'm not. I'm glad that you can forgive. I'm only hoping as time goes, you can forget

What do you think about these lyrics?
Wow this song is very deep i love the lyrics i can see how it would make you sad =( it just makes you think and it made me sad to but its still a great song.. thank you for posting the link =)
Reply:I love that song.


Brand new is a really good band.


Although their new stuff sounds nothing like their old stuff ]:


Who sings this song with the lyrics "I want to hold you close, soft breasts kneading hard"?

This song has been bugging me ever since i heard it. I want to know who sings it and what the title is. "I want to hold you close, skin pressed against me tight, hold on close your eyes girl, so lovely it feels so right"

Who sings this song with the lyrics "I want to hold you close, soft breasts kneading hard"?
"TEAR YOU APART"-SHE WANTS REVENGE





I LOVE THAT SONG!


:D





Got a big plan, this mindset maybe its right


At the right place and right time, maybe tonight


And the whisper or handshake sending a sign


Wanna make out and kiss hard, wait nevermind





Late night, and passing, mention it flipped her


Best friend, who knows saying maybe it slipped


But the slip turns to terror and a crush to light


When she walked in, he throws up, believe its the fright





Its cute in a way, till you cannot speak


And you leave to have a cigarette, your knees get weak


An escape is just a nod and a casual wave


Obsessed about it, heavy for the next two days





It's only just a crush, it'll go away


It's just like all the others it'll go away


Or maybe this is danger and you just don't know


You pray it all away but it continues to grow





I want to hold you close


Skin pressed against me tight


Lie still, and close your eyes girl


So lovely, it feels so right





I want to hold you close


Soft breasts, beating heart


As I whisper in your ear





I want to f*cking tear you apart





Then he walked up and told her, thinking that he'd passed


And they talked and looked away a lot, doing the dance


Her hand brushed up against his, she left it there


Told him how she felt and then they locked in a stare





They took a step back, thought about it, what should they do


Cause theres always repercussions when you're dating in school


But their lips met, and reservations started to pass


Whether this was just an evening or a thing that would last





Either way he wanted her and this was bad


He wanted to do things to her it was making him crazy


Now a little crush turned into a like


And now he wants to grab her by the hair and tell her





I want to hold you close


Skin pressed against me tight


Lie still, and close your eyes girl


So lovely, it feels so right





I want to hold you close


Soft breasts, beating heart


As I whisper in your ear


I want to f*cking tear you apart

queen of the night

Who sings the song with the lyrics something like "Feel the...?

rain on your skin...?

Who sings the song with the lyrics something like "Feel the...?
Natasha Bedingfield - Unwritten











I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined


I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand, ending unplanned





Staring at the blank page before you


Open up the dirty window


Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find





Reaching for something in the distance


So close you can almost taste it


Release your innovations


Feel the rain on your skin


No one else can feel it for you


Only you can let it in


No one else, no one else


Can speak the words on your lips


Drench yourself in words unspoken


Live your life with arms wide open


Today is where your book begins


The rest is still unwritten





Oh, oh, oh





I break tradition, sometimes my tries, are outside the lines


We've been conditioned to not make mistakes, but I can't live that way





Staring at the blank page before you


Open up the dirty window


Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find





Reaching for something in the distance


So close you can almost taste it


Release your inner visions


Feel the rain on your skin


No one else can feel it for you


Only you can let it in


No one else, no one else


Can speak the words on your lips


Drench yourself in words unspoken


Live your life with arms wide open


Today is where your book begins





Feel the rain on your skin


No one else can feel it for you


Only you can let it in


No one else, no one else


Can speak the words on your lips


Drench yourself in words unspoken


Live your life with arms wide open


Today is where your book begins


The rest is still unwritten





Staring at the blank page before you


Open up the dirty window


Let the sun illuminate the words that you could not find





Reaching for something in the distance


So close you can almost taste it


Release your inner visions


Feel the rain on your skin


No one else can feel it for you


Only you can let it in


No one else, no one else


Can speak the words on your lips


Drench yourself in words unspoken


Live your life with arms wide open


Today is where your book begins





Feel the rain on your skin


No one else can feel it for you


Only you can let it in


No one else, no one else


Can speak the words on your lips


Drench yourself in words unspoken


Live your life with arms wide open


Today is where your book begins


The rest is still unwritten


The rest is still unwritten


The rest is still unwritten
Reply:Need just a little more info
Reply:Natasha Bettingfield. I'm not sure I spelled her name right though.
Reply:Her name is Natasha Beddingfield, sister of Daniel Beddingfield. The song's name is Unwritten.
Reply:Natasha Bettingfield (sp) - Unwritten
Reply:Natasha Bettingfield
Reply:cjlusjw,i became so exciting when i read your question as i love this kind of songs .thanks to brad d i was able to knew all the song .thinks to both of you.
Reply:It's a line from Natasha Beddingfield's "Unwritten".


Musical Genius Who Can Put These Lyrics to Music?

Flaming worms crawl in, flaming worms crawl out, in the belly button and out the mouth! In the front and out the rear! In the eyes and out the ears! We scream for mercy yet NO one cares or hears! Red hot pain in my blood rivers of feces, lava, vomit and blood it looks like a flood! Flames everywhere yet they cast NO light! All I have is every kind of pain, terror, torture and fright! I am a Citizen in HELL!





This is the first level of HELL the other levels there are NO words to tell! Hell is so hot it boils the flesh off my skin how do I describe the HELLISH pain I'm in! I'm so thirsty yet I 've not even urine or tears to drink!And OH my GOD how this HELL stinks! AHHHH, I am a Citizen in HELL!





There's NO water of any kind not even sweat to cool my brow, I know from Hell I will never be set free and demons curse and mock me! I scream to God to help me! Yet he does NOT hear! Instead the voice of satan laughs and jeers! HaAa! There's NO GOD and there's NO mercy here!





poll qustn


What do u think of these lyrics? by poison the well?

Poison the well is the artist...





Loved Ones





Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for the 20 years.


I love trying to make conversation when I could careless of what you're


doing,


what are you doing? And I know you never cared 'till now.


All my days go back to when you would scream.


And it froze me.


Guess the screaming runs in the family.


You look tired and run-down. Are you even excited to see your baby boy?


Put a razor to the skin 'till we don't resemble each other anymore.


Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for the 20 years.


So now I see the tears welling up, finally you care I've waited all my life


for this.


It's always been over, it's always been over, it's always been over for us.


A single tear, a last resort for all who've never felt.


Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for these 20 years.


If I could flip this table I'd stab you with every word that lied its way


out of your hea

What do u think of these lyrics? by poison the well?
superb...........
Reply:sad. i havnt listened to them in ages. my mirror no longer reflects is my fav
Reply:Tremendously sad. Tortured soul that can't forgive, and will not know peace. The Greek meaning of forgiveness: to return to oneself. Think about it. Forgiveness is not as much for the other person, but for yourself.
Reply:Wow... I find that one of the saddest things I've ever come across. As a mother to a beautiful boy, I can't imagine having him grow up to feel that way.





It reminds me that I love my child with my whole heart and that I never want him to feel unloved or unwanted...
Reply:worse than the last lot of bilge I commented on....

golden ball

What do you think of these lyrics?

And if they get me and the sun goes down into the ground


And if they get me take this spike to my heart and


And if they get me and the sun goes down


And if they get me take this spike and


You put the spike in my heart


And if the sun comes up will it tear the skin right off our bones


And then as razor sharp white teeth rip out our necks I saw you there


Someone get me to the doctor, someone get me to a church


Where they can pump this venom gaping hole


And you must keep your soul like a secret in your throat


And if they come and get me


You put the spike in my heart


And if they get me and the sun goes down


And if they get me take this spike and


Can you take this spike?


Will it fill our hearts with thoughts of endless


Night time sky


Can you take this spike?


Will it wash away this jet black feeling?


And now the nightclub set the stage for this they come in pairs she said


We'll shoot back holy water like cheap whiskey they're always there


Someone get me to the doctor,

What do you think of these lyrics?
vampires will never hurt you-my chemical romance





i love that song, i like how they used vampires as a metaphor for people who want to use others for their own gain.


the video is pretty kool too.
Reply:I don't like the song very much. Report It

Reply:aww..


I love Vampires Will Never Hurt You..


I loooove the lyrics..


and the tune!


wait...i love the song!


that's just it..
Reply:Honestly... really, really, incredibly generic.
Reply:i LOVEE this song!
Reply:What do I think? I think they come from one of my favorite songs!


Hmmm, now I shall go listen to it...
Reply:Mamby pamby, captain kangaroo, mister rogers neighborhood, melodramatic, repetitive, emo, weak, false metal, pretentious, failure, hilarious.
Reply:ive never heard this song b4 but it sounds a bit emo...


What do you think of these lyrics?

I’m going to say this loud


Cuz I’m ugly and I’m proud


If you don’t like it


You can lump it


Ugly people rule


Cuz we look a like mule


Go uglies


Go Uglies








Uglies are the best


We have lots of zest


In our looks


We can write a book


On how we hate


To discriminate


Against others


We’re all sisters and brothers


And we know what it’s like


We’ll have a sympathy strike


For you


If people are mean to you


For us it’s déjà vu





I’m going to say this loud


Cuz I’m ugly and I’m proud


If you don’t like it


You can lump it


Ugly people rule


Cuz we look a like mule


Go uglies


Go Uglies





You pretty people suck


You’re all a bunch of shmucks


I don’t enjoy your stares


You give off an air


Like you’re better than me


HEHEHE


I don’t think so


Are you slow?


Were all ugly underneath our skin


So take it on the chin


That we’re all equal





I’m going to say this loud


Cuz I’m ugly and I’m proud


If you don’t like it


You can lump it


Ugly people rule


Cuz we look a like.

What do you think of these lyrics?
I am not ugly inside or out


and thats a fact and no doubt


but Im glad your sticking up


for those who ain't pretty


cuz it must suck to be an ugly bitty
Reply:gosh..who's wrote this???you??hiks..


not bad...
Reply:Um, I like that it rhymes. Yeah good job!

clear weed

What do u think of these lyrics? artist is poison the well?...?

Loved Ones





Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for the 20 years.


I love trying to make conversation when I could careless of what you're


doing,


what are you doing? And I know you never cared 'till now.


All my days go back to when you would scream.


And it froze me.


Guess the screaming runs in the family.


You look tired and run-down. Are you even excited to see your baby boy?


Put a razor to the skin 'till we don't resemble each other anymore.


Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for the 20 years.


So now I see the tears welling up, finally you care I've waited all my life


for this.


It's always been over, it's always been over, it's always been over for us.


A single tear, a last resort for all who've never felt.


Sit across from you, why are we even here?


There is no way to make up for these 20 years.


If I could flip this table I'd stab you with every word that lied its way


out of your head.

What do u think of these lyrics? artist is poison the well?...?
lol i'm glad i don't do relationships just come and go is what i call it but no i don't like it cause she caame from issues with love and now she causes issues with it.


Can you relate to these lyrics?

I felt you cut free turning cold shoulders To me


Growing blame lines communicating lies


Nothing more to trust fallacies of love


killing all that holds you





Bring me back to this what you said useless


Leave me i'll shed my skin these scars will mend

Can you relate to these lyrics?
definitely. what these lyrics mean to me is that someone turned a cold shoulder and set themselves free, and as a result blaming them and telling lies about them grew to the point where there's no more trust in the false belief that this is love, which really hurts and tears u up inside. i think 'bring me back to this what you said uselss. Leave me i'll shed my skin these scars will mend' is a way of saying that even though u want to be able to go back to the way things were b4 u met, u cant, and being left alone will turn you into a new and better person.


the reason y i can relate to this is because i just recently had this guy who i really liked and thought that i could potentially love who turned the cold shoulder on me and blaming me for things as well as telling lies about me to his friends. where i had this false idea that it could be love, it wasnt, and it hurt to see that happen to me because he really meant something to me. i wish i could go back in time to change what happened between us, but i cant, and all i can do now is move on with my life and come out as a new person, with the hope that this will all be fixed and i wont have to think about him anymore.
Reply:Sorry, doesn't speak to me.





Someone else will get it though.
Reply:very pretty:)
Reply:No.
Reply:Yes, a little.
Reply:Sounds like a relationship falling apart...yep I can relate...mine did but I am ok...just takes a little time.
Reply:Very deep, but not quite me. I could see how it could relate to other people, though. Sounds like Coldplay or U2
Reply:yes, I think many people could, anyone who has been hurt by love, or hurt in another fashion could pick something out of that and relate to it, although the lyrics seem a bit disjointed, and non musical.
Reply:Damn.Sorry about your lost.But time heals all wounds.
Reply:Whoever wrote this is crazy. I can't relate to these lyrics whatsoever.
Reply:Yes, I really can relate to those lyrics. I remember every time I got my heart broken. Luckily I am finaly with the one man I know will never hurt me.
Reply:bet it sounds way better when someone is singing this.. and it depends on how he/she sings it i have to say but for now, i can't really relate to it.
Reply:I'm sorry but I can't relate to it. Rock (music) isn't me. Hip-Hop and Pop is the new fave.


What do you think these lyrics mean?

this song is by saving jane.





Secrets told in the pictures on your skin


Hours fade into days that never end


I see myself reflected in your eyes


And I hate the way I'm wearing all these lies





[CHORUS:]


So I let you go


And I watch you leave


And I hold my breath


So you don't hear me scream


When you walk away


But the words are only in my head


It's not what I said


It's what I didn't say





Is she everything you wanted her to be?


Yeah, I bet she never breaks your heart like me


So it's one more night I cover up with you


And I hate myself for what I didn't do





[CHORUS]





Should've known better, now


All I have left is a permanent stain


The only part of you I get to keep forever


To prove I lived this pain





Maybe I was never as smart as I thought


Maybe we can never be as good as we want


Maybe you just didn't need me enough


Maybe we're too clever to be falling in love like this


Like this





Secrets told in the silence of my sin


And I'm the one who loses in the end

What do you think these lyrics mean?
Getting tattoos of a past love
Reply:I think the writer is trying to convey the sadness and hurt of a woman who has cheated or wronged her significant other, and how eventually the guilt she feels from keeping this secret tear the relationship apart.


Now, looking back on her lost love she is regretting all of the things she did wrong, and all of the things she could have said or done to right her wrong.
Reply:I'm thinking it was a guy who was with a gurl but loved another and was cheating on the gurl he was with with the other gurl and in the end that gurl breaks his heart and he realizes what he really should have done was go with the other gurl because she was the one who actually loved him
Reply:The song is "What I didn't say" and I think she is telling of her having an afair and not coming clean to her boyfriend. Her guilt is so over coming to her that she lets him go instead of coming clean. In the meantime he finds someone else and she finds out that she is pregnant.
Reply:check here-


http://www.songmeanings.net


http://www.songfacts.com

peacock plant

What do you think the lyrics in “Curse Of Curves” by Cute Is What We Aim For, mean?

In particular,


“I want someone provocative and talkative


But it's so hard when you're shallow as a shower


And from what I've heard with skin you'll win”


Is he talking about himself being “shallow as a shower”, or her?


I mean, is he saying that he wants someone “provocative and talkative” but it’s difficult to find that, because he himself is so shallow, or...? What are your thoughts...?

What do you think the lyrics in “Curse Of Curves” by Cute Is What We Aim For, mean?
He is trying to say that he wants someone different with a lot of personality but this girl isn't deep at all and has nothing going on in her mind.
Reply:I think it means he wants someone good looking. Have u seen the music video?
Reply:My be somthing nasty who knowns
Reply:well to start i think this song has some great lyrics. but i think this part is kinda saying he wants someone real. someone kinda risky but not stuck up.
Reply:Hmm, maybe he wants someone with killer looks but he himself doesnt have the looks himself and is only thinking that he has?
Reply:I think he is talking about the chic being shallow.


but great song.
Reply:He wants someone "provocative and talkative" but the person he's with is "shallow as a shower" and he is attracted to her dispite that.


Do you like my song lyrics?

You know that feeling when,


Everywhere you go.


Just fills your flying soul with rage.


The smell of mist lingers,


You wanna know,


What lives beyond this tiresome age.





And you'd do anything for adventure and laughter,


Sell tommorrow and each day that comes after.


Now this is a race,


Make sure you're fast,


We all die tommorrow,


So don't be last.





Won't be alive tommorrow,


To pay the price,


For the day where I spent my whole life.


Tommorow all that $hit,


Can't be denied,


But i feel to good for suicide,


So keep on pushing through my skin.





The gas can keep your life,


Eternal and still young.


Aurthoroties could never ever win.


Who cares if you die tommorrow,


Or your life's just begun,


Just remember never give in.





And you'd do anything for adventure and laughter,


Sell tommorrow and each day that comes after,


Who knew that something like,


Running out of cash,


Kill immortal spirits,


Oh so fast


CHORUS

Do you like my song lyrics?
Hey, that sounds like a good song. Do you play guitar too? If not, you should pick it up.


What song is this? (Full lyrics)?

You don't have to move, you don't have to speak


Lips for biting.


You're staring me down, a glance makes me weak


Eyes for sriking.


Now I'm twisted up when I'm twisted with you


Brush so lightly


And time trickles down, and I'm breathing for two


Squeeze so tightly.


I'll be fine, you'll be fine.


This moment seems so long


Don't waste now, precious time


We'll dance inside the song





CHORUS


What makes the one to shake you down?


Each touch belongs to each new sound


Say now you want to shake me too


Move down to me, slip into you





She sinks in my mind as she sheds through her skin


Touch sight taste like fire


Hands do now what eyes no longer defend


Hands to fuel desire


I'll be fine, you'll be fine


This moment seems so long


Don't waste now, precious time


We'll dance inside the song





CHORUS


What makes the one to shake you down?


Each touch belongs to each new sound


Say now you want to shake me too


Move down to me, slip into you





Ooo, ah


Ooo, ah


Ooo, ah


Ooo, ah (x 2)





And I'll be fine, you'll be fine


Is this fine? I'm not fine


Give me pieces, give me things to stay awake





CHORUS


What makes the one to shake you down?


Each touch belongs to each new sound


Say now you want to shake me too


Move down to me, slip into you





CHORUS


What makes the one to shake you down?


Each touch belongs to each new sound


Say now you want to shake me too


Move down to me, slip into you





Move down to me slip into you...

What song is this? (Full lyrics)?
Dance inside by All American Rejects
Reply:Muse - Hysteria
Reply:"Dance Inside" by The All-American Rejects. Great song; very sexy...although that may just be Tyson Ritter, who knows? :) Nice choice.


What are your favorite rock lyrics?

mine are from "Worth dying for" by Rise Against





"Set me off like dynamite strapped tight around my waist,


We are the ones in competition but claim this ain't no race.





Take a breath and explode like bullets,


Tearing through the wind,


Cut me up with a razor blade,


That tries to separate the skin,


Now in the white flames of burning flags,


We found a world worth dying for


We've been battered so hard that,


We don't feel anymore.





Take me,


From this world,


Save me,


What if we,


All died young?


So take me


From this world


Save me,


What if we,


All died young?





Send me off on the morning breeze so far away from here,


Feel me rise in the strength I've found in the warm embracing air,


I'm moving slow,


Like a glacier melting,


Watch me dissipate,


I searched for love in an empty world,


But all I found was hate,


Now in the white flames of burning flags,


We found a world worth dying for


We've been battered so hard that,


We don't feel anymore.





Don't ask me why

What are your favorite rock lyrics?
Hmmmmmmm...................I have a few. 1: I want these words to make things right, but its the wrongs that make the words come to life,Fall out boy, Thnks fr th mmrs.2: Don't waste your time or time will waste you,Muse, knights of Cydonia.3: Here, here comes the water, it comes to wash away the sins of you and I, Velvet Revolver, Slither.
Reply:"Even your girlfriend F**kin sucks"


"Hell ya she F**kin sucks"





SYL!!!!!!!!!!!
Reply:This is my favorite





Duncan Hills Coffee Jingle by Dethklok





Do You Folks Like Coffee?


Real Coffee,


From the Hills Of Colombia?





The Duncan Hills awake you


From A Thousand Deaths.


A Cup Of blackened Blood.


(Die, Die)


You're Dying For A Cup.





Guatemala Blend,


Ethiopian,


French Vanilla Roast.


(Die, Die)


You're Dying For A Cup.





Prepare For Ultimate Flavor!


You're Gonna Get Some... now


And Scream... For Your Cream





[Solo]





Duncan Hills,


Duncan Hills,


Duncan Hills Coffee.

pink

"Why cant we be friends" lyrics.....by War?

I was watching the Alma Awards last night and the band War was performing "why cant we be friends" and after the line "the color of your skin dont matter to me" i clearly heard someone say "LIAR". was that part of their song?

"Why cant we be friends" lyrics.....by War?
War - Why Can't We Be Friends?





It's not a part of the lyrics, but sometimes artists change some of the words when they perform the song live.
Reply:http://www.lyricsondemand.com/w/warlyric...





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





I seen you around for a long long time, ya


I really remembered you when you drink my wine





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





I seen you walkin' down in Chinatown


I called you but you could not look around





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





I bring my money to the welfare line


I see you standing in it every time





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





The color of your skin don't matter to me


As long as we can live in harmony





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





I'd kinda like to be the President


So I can show you how your money's spent





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





Sometimes I don't speak right


But yet I know what I'm talking about





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends





I know you're workin' for the CIA


They wouldn't have you in the Ma-fi-a





Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends


Why can't we be friends...





A disgruntled audience member was probably the one saying "liar" because that's not in the song.
Reply:no


What do you think these lyrics mean?

War has desecrated this ground


And now impurity reigns


Marshes of blood and mud


Remains from the fallen ones


They, who were once brilliant and pure


Are now meat for the ghouls


No plant can grow here


And fog smells like pure evil





Dead lights walk crying in despair


Eyes that can't see but their own death


Images coming back from hell


Creatures of darkness





Wearing the skin of the dead ones


They devour the fallen corpses


And use their rusty swords


As hammers to break the bones





Kingdoms fall and new wars come


Warriors die and their bodies decay


Feeding the creatures of the place


Where rottenness dwells





Time pass, ineffable


Everything perishes, unstoppably


Nothing remains in the place


Where rottenness dwells

What do you think these lyrics mean?
ok, chrisitans, u guys r supposed to be optomistic.. but ur not u only think ur religion is corrct so stop!! and that poem was really deep.
Reply:Is this from the LOTR?





:)
Reply:PEICE OF S.H.I.T
Reply:Deep.
Reply:That war destorys us as humans but as long as we are alive there will be wars
Reply:I think they mean that some high school graduate took a break from drawing skulls on his notebook to writing some lyrics for an imaginary metal band he wants to start.
Reply:It means war has ruined this place and once people who where nice and kind have turned to killers and murders, probablying refering to the soliders and when it says wearing skin of the dead ones means disguising themselves and attacking. This is all about war and the evilness it holds.
Reply:These are the most emo lyrics I have ever heard. They mean nothing. Were they written by a vietnam vet, they might have some meaning. But seeing as they were probably written by that queer from My Chemical Romance they don't mean ****.
Reply:It sounds like some lame sword metal song. What is the name of the song?





Where Rottenness Dwells - DAEMONLORD. The name says it all...
Reply:Yeah... I was thinking LOTR too.
Reply:it means someone plays dungeons and dragons too much.
Reply:They come from the hand of a person who hates this world.
Reply:THEY DON'T MEAN ANYTHING TO SUM OF US HERE
Reply:Some freaky Final Fantasy story
Reply:i think its very pessimistic. and about death.


ok
Reply:Something along the lines of I'M A TEENAGER I LISTEN TO METAL **** YOU MUM
Reply:That the graveyard is a wonderful place to have a spite of tea with a good morning cup of Joe
Reply:metalica maybe !!!!!


Does any one know the lyrics to...?

"skin and bones" by Moraine


pleease help.

Does any one know the lyrics to...?
Moraine - Skin and Bones





You are tangled in my head


Wish we were tangled in your sheets


You could stop this all right now


Or we could start playing for keeps


But I need you so close just like skin and bones


And that's more than I needed before I need you





I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.


Damn I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.





I am sick of your excuses


They are useless and so truthless


You just pave the way for conversations


With all of your big explanations


Damnit, I wish that you were someone else so this could be a little more fair


A little more fair





I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.


Damn I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.





Everyone's thinking the same thing


Damn this is getting interesting to watch his game unfold


He's got someone so close like his skin and bones


But he's walking out the door





And I will stay outside till I get cold


I don't even care if I grow old


I'm living life like I don't mind


People come and go sometimes





I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.


Damn I need you so close just like skin and bones


But that's more than I ever needed.


Do you like my song lyrics?

You know that feeling when,


Everywhere you go.


Just fills your flying soul with rage.


The smell of mist lingers,


You wanna know,


What lives beyond this tiresome age.





And you'd do anything for adventure and laughter,


Sell tommorrow and each day that comes after.


Now this is a race,


Make sure you're fast,


We all die tommorrow,


So don't be last.





Won't be alive tommorrow,


To pay the price,


For the day where I spent my whole life.


Tommorow all that $hit,


Can't be denied,


But i feel to good for suicide,


So keep on pushing through my skin.





The gas can keep your life,


Eternal and still young.


Aurthoroties could never ever win.


Who cares if you die tommorrow,


Or your life's just begun,


Just remember never giv in.





And you'd do anything for adventure and laughter,


Sell tommorrow and each day that comes after,


Who knew that something like,


Running out of cash,


Kill immortal spirits,


Oh so fast


CHORUS

Do you like my song lyrics?
I like!!!

periwinkle

Anyone can help find the lyrics or song title for these primary school songs? i only remember parts of it?

1. well done .you beat the lot well done. you came out tops well done ...





2. why does it have to be me? ... why do i have to do things i don't want to do why does it have to be me?





3.wouldnt it be funny if the sky was green...qwouldnt it be funny if you could c through skin... wouldnt it be strange .. wouldnt it be most parculiar indeed...





4. if your feeling sad and weary and your down in the dumps down in the dumps... there something you can do... dont be grumpy dont go on and on...





5. the earth it keeps turing living and learning as the day goes on...

Anyone can help find the lyrics or song title for these primary school songs? i only remember parts of it?
=sorry do not know those specific songs but found you a great site loaded with kids songs.. I was reading and singing. Thanks for the question.
Reply:What school did you go to?????


Somebody want to know the lyrics to this song and I aint gettin paid 4 it; so who needs it?

*talking*


Oh my god


Becky, look at her butt


Its so big


She looks like one of those rap guys girlfriends


Who understands those rap guys


They only talk to her because she looks like a total pro*


I mean her butt


It's just so big


I can't believe it's so round


It's just out there


I mean, it's gross


Look, she's just so black





*rap*


I like big butts and I can not lie


You other brothers can't deny


That when a girl walks in with an itty bitty waist


And a round thing in your face


You get sprung


Wanna pull up tough


Cuz you notice that butt was stuffed


Deep in the jeans she's wearing


I'm hooked and I can't stop staring


Oh, baby I wanna get with ya


And take your picture


My homeboys tried to warn me


But that butt you got


Make Me so h****


Ooh, rump of smooth skin


You say you wanna get in my benz


Well use me use me cuz you aint that average groupy





I've seen them dancin'


The hell with romancin'


She's Sweat,Wet, got it goin like a turbo vette





I'm tired of

Somebody want to know the lyrics to this song and I aint gettin paid 4 it; so who needs it?
That song is by Sir-Mix-A-Lot
Reply:I'm confused as to what the question is...





But the song is "U Can't Touch This" by M.C. Hammer.
Reply:it s u only


Okay, i perfected these lyrics. Opinions?

Two hours listening to the Velvet Underground resulted in this little diddy:








No, no, baby, I know what's right


You were talking in your sleep last night


Said that it was a special kind of place,


And that everything's alright.


It's alright.





Marilyn


Your hair's the same color as your skin


Gorgeous Marilyn


Missy Marilyn, you know that's not where I am.





Watching people under me


Watching people under me


First floor people walking under me


I'll spit on their heads.





What do you want, Marilyn?


What do you want to be?


a supermodel for your glossy magazines?


Or do you want to spit on people's heads,


With me?


With me?





Something's got it's hold on me


And I don't know what


Something's got it's hold on me


And I don't know what


Get you to hold on to me


And I don’t know what


I don’t know what.





No, no, baby, I know what's right


You were talking in your sleep last night


Said that it was a special kind of place,


And that everything's alright.


It's alright.

Okay, i perfected these lyrics. Opinions?
never post stuff on the internet without proof of ownership, if someone likes this, its good as stolen
Reply:I'm glad you have taken an interest in poetry . I like it !


It needs a Lil' polish!


Something that's helped me ...is a little voice activated


tape recorder.


You have a way of expression...that is all yours!


Sometimes we are our own best critic!


You pour out your heart in your poetry....


It's like painting a picture, only with words!


Can anyone guess these lyrics?

ill go easy and then get harder as the list goes down








1) "this is the scent of dead skin on a linoleum floor, this is the scent of quarantine wings in a hospital...."





2) "i wrote the gospel of giving up (you look pretty sinking), but the real bombshells have already sunk (prema donas of the gutter)"





3) "she moves like beams of light, straigh through this universe in my head"





4) "one last chance to reverse this curse, you stole my heart but i had it first"





5) her eyes still glow like heaven, broken, unsound, cut her wings off.








ok, i know these wert THAT hard. but im bored and those just popped into my head ok. hahaha


thanks


♥♥♥

Can anyone guess these lyrics?
1. Camisado by Panic! at the disco


2. This ain't a scene it's an arms race by Fall Out Boy


3. Space Travel by Yellow Card


4. Reverse this curse by Escape the fate


5. I am ghost- dark carnival of the immaculate





Good music!!
Reply:no idea
Reply:2)This Ain't a Scene, It's an Arms Race- Fall Out Boy
Reply:yea. it is Dark Carnival of the Immaculate
Reply:1) Panic! at the disco - relax relapse


2)Fall out boy - this aint a scene


3) yellowcard -space travel


4) escape the fate - reverse this curse


5) dark carnival of the immaculate - i am ghost

night blooming cereus

Does anyone know the lyrics to this song?

It goes like





Insert me into your skin


I will be your heroin





Or something like that? Anyone?

Does anyone know the lyrics to this song?
http://www.lyricsmania.com/lyrics/porcel...





I'm Your Favorite Drug- Porcelain and the Tramps
Reply:What you get is what you see


it wont take much to get hooked on me


so shoot me right into your skin


and I will be your heroin





The side effects are sexual


and your dying for a taste


the side effects are sexual


and you love the way I say Report It

Reply:is that it? Report It

Reply:type in the lyrics you know and look it up
Reply:nope...don't believe i have
Reply:I think you are talking about Q-Strange "Heroin"





You'll never leave me


You need me in this life


You can't live without me


I own you


You belong to me


That's right, don't ever try to leave me


Because you can't


You can't do it


You know who I am





(Who are you? Tell em' your name*)





My name is Heroin I'm better than your medicine


I'll take your life and your soul if you let me in


There ain't a problem in this world that I can't fix


There ain't a pain that you have I can't help you deal with (X 2)





You need me you can't live without me inside you


Don't believe in negative press you've been lied to


I'm all you need in life you can't breathe without me


I'm your best friend, your lover and your family


I make you feel like you have supernatural power


I'm all you need and I'm just a brown powder


You'd steal from your own mother just to have me


Walk through the worst neighborhoods just to grab me


Sitting in a corner putting me in a spoon


Anticipating the feeling you're gonna have soon


Burning me, turning me into liquid form


It's a great habit what you wanna kick it for


You look at you, you're trembling putting me in that syringe


You're pocking your skin you're trying to get me in


Youll shoot me through your eyelids just to get me to your brain


The faster I can go there and ease your pain


In your vein I just slither like a venoms snake and it's great


I can't wait to end your heartache


I slowly cross the blood brain barrier


Give birth to morpheme finds to open your receptors


You have a sensation; you're calling it a rush


The intensity because you had all my drug


And the faster that I find to open your receptors


The more intense the rush is, it feels even better


You might have a warm blushing in your skin


Have a dry mouth or happiness in your limbs


You might be nauseous, vomit, have severe itching


But it's worth it nothing beats this here feeling





(Chorus X 3)





You got problems in your life I can help you through it


you tried to dump me once before but you couldn't do it


You had insomnia, muscle and bone pain


Worse than when you tried to leave my cousin named Cocaine


You were vomiting, restless, had cold flashes


It's just you and me no one knows you're an addict


You're psychically dependent on me now. Don't you see that?


You would die without me in your life, believe that


I've infected your heart and collapsed you veins


Ive done sever damage to your brain


Because of me youve had bacterial infections


A small price to pay that's the cost of my affection


The high is wearing of you're drowsy for a couple of hours


My affects have got your mental function all clouded


You heart rate drops you respiratory system slows


You're slowly fading as a victim of my overdose


You needed me but don't you see I don't need you


There's a lot of people in this world that need me too


I just used you like the stupid ***** you are


I left you dead in your own vomit on the kitchen floor


I didn't care about you; you're just a ***** to me


I know you cheated on me with my brother Ecstasy


We got more people to infect, you can't stop me


These rehabs and clinics people still can't drop me


I've been on a killing spree for decades now


There ain't nothing in this world gonna slow me down





Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha


Yeah that's right


You can't stop me


I'm just gonna keep going


I'ma keep ending more lives, infecting more people


This ain't never gonna stop


Cause once you've had me, you can't live without me in your life


I will rule your whole world


You live for me


I own you
Reply:The only song I can think of is "Hero/Heroin" by Boys Like Girls...


It says, "I feel like a hero and you are my heroine


Do you know that your love is the sweetest sin?"


That's close, but I'm not sure if it's right...
Reply:sorry i dont know the lyrics but it sounds familiar to me.


Do you like these lyrics... wrote them in about 8 minutes?

i wonder why it happens so fast


the fact that we never last


is so sad


on my behalf


why should i give you another thought


when you always wanted to stop


and you leavings a blessing


for me to see





and everybody looks at


all the hospital beds


searching for something


anything to take them home


cause these places were seeing


dont believe in them


(chorus)


the lady screams doctor help him


hes only a boy


but it seems he cant care less


just a cheap little toy


theres always more disease


theres always more problems


experiments


more subjects





get him out get him out


hes bleedin cant you see


these technicoloured papers let leave


oh theres a problem theres a problem


should he be shaking like this


his eyes wont move and


his heart jus skipped a beat


and theres much than what he bargained for





chorus


(bridge)


there leaving him


if he could save himself


hed be okay


theyre leaving him


LEAVING ME


an untangled heap of skin


a beatless heart full of sin





chorus

Do you like these lyrics... wrote them in about 8 minutes?
wow that is the best song i have seen that has only been written in 8 mins! u have alot of talent there. try to write lots of other songs and try to become a songwriter for bandz and things like that. ur real good!
Reply:those are actually really good, you seriously talented!
Reply:not bad for writing um so quick i like it
Reply:yeah this is really good...i wrote something close to this not too long ago...you are talented
Reply:wow...very nice


Honest opinions on these lyrics?

(V.1)Open eyes....I`m here again


and re-analyse all thats been


still feel the curse,now need the nurse,(I) play with the snake


just to escape


(V.2)Routine etched underneath my skin


the law divine would say i`ve sinned


hypocrisy rules,so we`re all fools,


will not conform,until then I`m scorn


(CHOR.)Wield the scythe and feel obliged...you won`t bury me alive.Taste my blood and let it flood...you can`t bury me alive.





(There is a third verse but I won`t push my luck!)

Honest opinions on these lyrics?
hey, it sounds pretty cool to me.
Reply:Is this for Mariah Carey's new album?
Reply:Some of the rhymes are too forced sounding, in the first verse. Curse-Nurse and Snake-escape. To me, it just sounds like you tried to hard to get the rhyme scheme and if your going to have a scheme, you should follow through with it, or it sounds "off"





Other than that, its good.





Also, you could improve some of your word choice. Try to find some awesome synonyms for the boring words. Good luck, and happy writing!
Reply:u need a girlfriend!!!!! it is ok. keep working on it :-)
Reply:lose the word, "still" in the first verse third line





pretty good, but it's too gory for my taste
Reply:i like everything a lot except maybe you should think about changing


- still feel the curse,now need the nurse,(I) play with the snake


just to escape-





but whatev thats just my opinion its still good
Reply:yes. don't push your luck! kidding. just...don't exagerate when you try to rhyme. let the words come naturally and don't force them to rhyme because you lose the meaning and you don't wanna do that. but it's good. and i challenge you to find a song tu put them on. i bet you won't manage to do it. i don't know how you imagine it will sound like but i think that if you don't shorten them a little or do better rhymes it will definitely be a rap song. :P hope this helped...:)
Reply:it is coolio but i really dont like the line "play with the snake just to escape" it kind of throws it off! and if its a rock song all the lines dont have to rhyme that is the good thing about rock music. but u r good keep going i want to hear the third verse:)


What song are these lyrics from? Black sun rising above.?

Here is the black sun rising above.


Making the blackbird crying for love.


I feel the black rays burning my skin.


Trying to burn up all of my sin.

What song are these lyrics from? Black sun rising above.?
Those lyrics are from the song "Black Sun" by Nik Felice.





http://www.nikfelice.com/index.htm





That's one obscure damn tune bud!
Reply:Sounds like some crappy Creed song...
Reply:I checked Yahoo Music/lyrics and can't find a match for those lyrics.


What are your favorite lyrics ?

Good Riddance by Green Day





So take the photographs, and still frames in your mind


Hang it on a shelf in good health and good time


Tattoos of memories and dead skin on trial


For what it's worth it was worth all the while


It's something unpredictable, but in the end it's right.


I hope you had the time of your life.

What are your favorite lyrics ?
Civil War - Guns N Roses








What we've got here is failure to communicate.


Some men you just can't reach...


So, you get what we had here last week,


Which is the way he wants it !


Well, he gets it !


N' I don't like it any more than you men.





Look at your young men fighting


Look at your women crying


Look at your young men dying


The way they've always done before





Look at the hate we're breeding


Look at the fear we're feeding


Look at the lives we're leading


The way we've always done before





My hands are tied


The billions shift from side to side


And the wars go on with brainwashed pride


For the love of God and our human rights


And all these things are swept aside


By bloody hands time can't deny


And are washed away by your genocide


And history hides the lies of our civil wars








D'you wear a black armband


When they shot the man


Who said "Peace could last forever"


And in my first memories


They shot Kennedy


I went numb when I learned to see


So I never fell for Vietnam


We got the wall of D.C. to remind us all


That you can't trust freedom


When it's not in your hands


When everybody's fightin'


For their promised land





And


I don't need your civil war


It feeds the rich while it buries the poor


You're power hungry sellin' soldiers


In a human grocery store


Ain't that fresh


I don't need your civil war





Look at the shoes you're filling


Look at the blood we're spilling


Look at the world we're killing


The way we've always done before


Look in the doubt we've wallowed


Look at the leaders we've followed


Look at the lies we've swallowed


And I don't want to hear no more





My hands are tied


For all I've seen has changed my mind


But still the wars go on as the years go by


With no love of God or our human rights


and all these dreams are swept aside


By bloody hands of the hypnotized


Who carry the cross of homicide


And history bears the scars of our civil wars





We practice selective annihilation


Of mayors and government officials


For example to create a vacuum


Then we fill that vacuum


As popular war advances


Peace is closer





I don't need your civil war


It feeds the rich while it buries the poor


You're power hungry sellin' soldiers


In a human grocery store


Ain't that fresh


And I don't need your civil war


I don't need your civil war


I don't need your civil war


You're power hungry sellin' soldiers


In a human grocery store


Ain't that fresh


I don't need your civil war


I don't need one more war





I don't need one more war


Whaz so civil 'bout war anyway?
Reply:She told him she’d rather fix her makeup


Than try to fix what’s going on


But the problem keeps on calling


Even with the cellphone gone


She told him that she believes in living


Bigger than she’s living now


But her world keeps spinning backwards


And upsidedown


Don’t say so long in the cellphone


Don’t spend today away


Cuz today will soon be





Gone, like yesterday is gone,


Like history is


Gone, just trying to prove me wrong


And pretend like your immortal





(Gone by Switchfoot)
Reply:I can see clearly now the rain is gone


I can see all obstacles in my way





gonna be a bright bright bright sun shiny day
Reply:Doll Dagga Buzz Buzz Ziggety Zag, Godmod Grotesque Burlesk Drag


(Marilyn manson)
Reply:One by U2





Have you come here for forgiveness?


Have you come to raise the dead?


Have you come here to play Jesus to the lepers in your head?





Did I ask too much?


More than alot?


You gave me nothing


Now it's all I got.
Reply:(yours is a great song, btw!!)





So far away


Come on I'll take you far away


Let's get away


Come on let's make a get away





Once you have loved someone this much


you doubt it could fade


despite how much you'd like it to


God how you'd like it


you'd like it to fade





Let's fade together


Let's fade forever





If we get away


You know we might just stay away


So stay awake


Oh, why the hell should I stay awake?


When you're far away


Oh god you are so far away





I looked at your wall


Saw that old passport photograph


I look like I've just jumped the Berlin Wall


Berlin I love you


I'm starting to fade





Let's fade together


Let's fade forever
Reply:Life is a road


And I want to keep going


Love is a river


I wanna keep flowing


Life is a road


Now and forever


Wonderful journey





I'll be there


When the world stops turning


I'll be there


When the storm is through


In the end I wanna be standing


At the beginning with you





--that is from "at the beginning-- song from anastasia movie
Reply:Summer has come and passed.


The innocent can never last


Wake me up,


When September ends.





Like my father's come to pass, seven years has gone so fast.


Wake me up,


When September ends.





Here comes the rain again,


Falling from the stars;


Drenched in my pain again,


Becoming who we are.





As my memory rests,


But never forgets what I lost.


Wake me up,


When September ends.





Wake Me Up When September Ends - Greenday
Reply:beyond the blue horizon


waits a beautiful day


goodbye to things that bore me


joy is waiting for me.


i see a new horizon


my life has only begun


beyond the blue horizon


lies a rising sun.


Beyond the Blue Horizon --Michael Nesmith
Reply:Our Song Lyrics by Taylor Swift





*** Complimentary Our Song Ringtone ***


I was riding shot gun


with my hair undone


in the front seat of his car





hes got a one hand feel


on the steering wheel


the other on my heart


i look around turn the radio down


he says baby is somthing wrong





I said nothing


i was just thinking


how we dont have a song


and he said,





our song is the slamming screen doors


sneaking out late tapping on your window


when we're on the phone


and you talk real slow


because its late and your mamma don't know





our song is the way he laughs,


the first date man i didnt kiss him when i should have


and when i got home


before i said amen


asking god if he could play it again





I was walking up the front porch steps


after everything that day


had gone all wrong


had been trampled on


and lost and thrown a way


got to the hallway


well on my way


to my love in bed


i almost didnt notice all the roses and a note that said,





our song is the slamming screen doors


sneaking out late tapping on your window


[Our Song lyrics on http://www.metrolyrics.com]





when we're on the phone


and you talk real slow


because its late and your mamma don't know





our song is the way he laughs,


the first date man i didnt kiss him when i should have


and when i got home


before i said amen


asking god if he could play it again





I heard every album listen to the radio,


waiting for somthing to come along


it was as good as our song





(slower)


our song is the slamming screen doors


sneaking out late tapping on your window


when we're on the phone


and you talk real slow


because its late and your mamma don't know





our song is the way he laughs,


the first date man i didnt kiss him when i should have


and when i got home


before i said amen


asking god if he could play it again





play it again


oH yeaH..





uh uh yeah





i was riding shotgun


with my hair undone


in the front seat of his car





I grabbed a pen and an old napkin


and i wrote down our song


Do you like my lyrics? (revised from last night)?

I Am Always Here





If you need me,


I am right here.


If you feel despaired,


Let me catch your tears.








I want to help,


With all of my heart.


But you push me away.


How am I supposed to start?








You are so beautiful,


If only you could see.


How perfect you are,


To me.








I am your friend,


And always will be.


I am here to help,


But what will happen if you won't trust me?








If you need me,


I am right here.


I will hold you in my arms,


And chase away your fear.








You don't see yourself clearly,


You only see what's wrong.


I'll be right here for you,


Even as you pull away from me, I sing this song.





You don't realize,


That what's important is within.


I will protect you,


Until you are ready to stand in your skin.





I will stay up all night with you,


All you need to do is ask.


I am here for you,


And I will help you battle your past.








I am here,


And always will be.


When you are blind to your own beauty,


I will help you see.

Do you like my lyrics? (revised from last night)?
I think they're good, my sister is a singer and song writer so I know little something, and that was good, lol I was singing it.
Reply:ilike them do you have music to them yet
Reply:Well, I'd hate anyone who sang that to me (because of the sentiment expressed), but it's neatly written and very starightforward, so I guess it's good, cconsidering the intent. As a musician/composer, I'd send you home to cut it down to at least a half, and come up with a "hook" - a "hit in the head' memorable catch-phrase for the title/chorus.

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Can someone tell me the artist to these lyrics?

Whenever I rise and I see you by my side


I feel renewed


And I feel annihilated


Annihilated if you are not


you control all my truth and everything what is


Your eyes take slowly to the sun


And your mouth speaks of the love and the heart to me


Your skin has the color of a red one to get late





And it is by you...


That it annoys my heart


And it is by you...


That my eyes shine today


And it is by you...


That I have returned to speak of love


And it is by you...


That calm my pain





And whenever I look for you


And I cannot still find you


I feel like a vagabond


Lost by the world


Disordered if you are not


As you move my happiness


And everything what is of more


Your eyes take slowly to the sun


And your mouth speaks of the love and the heart to me


Your skin has the color of a red one to get late

Can someone tell me the artist to these lyrics?
Hi Playin' - this was a tough one. The song was big on the 2002 Latin Charts......title is "It is by you" sung by Juans or in Spanish "Es Por Ti" by Juanes. I am putting the lyrics below in both languages...hope this helps...





Whenever I rise


and I see that to my side you are and I feel annihilated


I feel annihilated annihilated if you are not


Your you control all my truth and everything what is of more


Your eyes take slowly to the sun


And your mouth speaks of the love and the heart to me


Your skin has the color of a red one to get late


And it is by you...


That it annoys my heart


And it is by you...


That my eyes shine today


And it is by you...


That I have returned to speak of love


And it is by you...


That calm my pain


And whenever I look for to you


And you I cannot still find


I feel like a vagabond


Lost by the world


Disordered if you are not


As you move my happiness


And everything what is of more


Your eyes take slowly to the sun


And your mouth speaks of the love and the heart to me


Your skin has the color of a red one to get late


And it is by you...


That it annoys my heart


And it is by you...


That I have returned to speak of love


And it is by you...


That my eyes shine today


And it is by you...


That calm my pain





Cada vez que me levanto


y veo que a mi lado estás y me siento aniquilado


Me siento aniquilado aniquilado si no estás


Tu controlas toda mi verdad y todo lo que está de más


Tus ojos me llevan lentamente al sol


Y tu boca me habla del amor y el corazón


Tu piel tiene el color de un rojo atardecer


Y es por ti...


Que late mi corazón


Y es por ti...


Que brillan mis ojos hoy


Y es por ti...


Que he vuelto a hablar de amor


Y es por ti...


Que calma mi dolor


Y cada vez que yo te busco


Y no te puedo aún hallar


Me siento un vagabundo


Perdido por el mundo


Desordenado si no estás


Como mueves tú mi felicidad


Y todo lo que está de más


Tus ojos me llevan lentamente al sol


Y tu boca me habla del amor y el corazón


Tu piel tiene el color de un rojo atardecer


Y es por ti...


Que late mi corazón


Y es por ti...


Que he vuelto a hablar de amor


Y es por ti...


Que brillan mis ojos hoy


Y es por ti...


Que calma mi dolor





Juanes, (born August 9, 1972), born Juan Esteban Aristizábal Vásquez, is a Colombian rock singer-songwriter-guitarist born in Medellín. When he was younger, his father started calling him Juanes, rather than Juan, a contraction of his first and middle names Juan and Esteban. As his friends grew to know him by this name, he chose to keep it for his musical career, which started when he, Andrés García, Fernando "Toby" Tobón and José David Lopera, formed the rock band Ekhymosis.