Do you like my lyrics? (revised from last night)?

I Am Always Here





If you need me,


I am right here.


If you feel despaired,


Let me catch your tears.








I want to help,


With all of my heart.


But you push me away.


How am I supposed to start?








You are so beautiful,


If only you could see.


How perfect you are,


To me.








I am your friend,


And always will be.


I am here to help,


But what will happen if you won't trust me?








If you need me,


I am right here.


I will hold you in my arms,


And chase away your fear.








You don't see yourself clearly,


You only see what's wrong.


I'll be right here for you,


Even as you pull away from me, I sing this song.





You don't realize,


That what's important is within.


I will protect you,


Until you are ready to stand in your skin.





I will stay up all night with you,


All you need to do is ask.


I am here for you,


And I will help you battle your past.








I am here,


And always will be.


When you are blind to your own beauty,


I will help you see.

Do you like my lyrics? (revised from last night)?
I think they're good, my sister is a singer and song writer so I know little something, and that was good, lol I was singing it.
Reply:ilike them do you have music to them yet
Reply:Well, I'd hate anyone who sang that to me (because of the sentiment expressed), but it's neatly written and very starightforward, so I guess it's good, cconsidering the intent. As a musician/composer, I'd send you home to cut it down to at least a half, and come up with a "hook" - a "hit in the head' memorable catch-phrase for the title/chorus.

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