Do you like these lyrics... wrote them in about 8 minutes?

i wonder why it happens so fast


the fact that we never last


is so sad


on my behalf


why should i give you another thought


when you always wanted to stop


and you leavings a blessing


for me to see





and everybody looks at


all the hospital beds


searching for something


anything to take them home


cause these places were seeing


dont believe in them


(chorus)


the lady screams doctor help him


hes only a boy


but it seems he cant care less


just a cheap little toy


theres always more disease


theres always more problems


experiments


more subjects





get him out get him out


hes bleedin cant you see


these technicoloured papers let leave


oh theres a problem theres a problem


should he be shaking like this


his eyes wont move and


his heart jus skipped a beat


and theres much than what he bargained for





chorus


(bridge)


there leaving him


if he could save himself


hed be okay


theyre leaving him


LEAVING ME


an untangled heap of skin


a beatless heart full of sin





chorus

Do you like these lyrics... wrote them in about 8 minutes?
wow that is the best song i have seen that has only been written in 8 mins! u have alot of talent there. try to write lots of other songs and try to become a songwriter for bandz and things like that. ur real good!
Reply:those are actually really good, you seriously talented!
Reply:not bad for writing um so quick i like it
Reply:yeah this is really good...i wrote something close to this not too long ago...you are talented
Reply:wow...very nice