How do these lyrics sound?? any editing will help i just wanna know what people think?

When we were little i said


lets be friends


lets go crawfisin in the creek


when we grow up . lets,


Go to dances and be there for eachother


Chours


I lay down with a frown and memories flowin threw my mind


of whin i told you i liked you as a friend.


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when we were little i said no to games


we grew up and grep apart now we R 16


i see the real side of you you think your cool with your snake skin boots look in the mirror your nothing but a coot


Chours


I lay down with a frown and memories flowin thre my head of when i Told U i liked U more than a friend


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People say we are one united just please look can U C you have changed not me.


I want to dance with U and scream YeHa and oh your face a grin shall stay


Chours


I lay down with a frown and moemorie flowin thre my head of when i told you i love you

How do these lyrics sound?? any editing will help i just wanna know what people think?
I think you need to check your spelling....