I have a ? about writing lyrics for a rap?

my final exam is writing a lyrics to a song about my brother so i made up my title its going to be called my brothers angel this is why


when he was 6 he devolped a deadly virus in was in the hospital for about 3 months he couldnt have skin to sjin contact with people he died for about 6 min till his heart start beating again,another is when he was 11 we was palying on the playground in the hood in a white man shot him on the top of the head from his up stairs window he was dead for about 10 min. till they where able to bring him back in the ambulance, another is he was driving with his friend and he bent over to pick up a droped ciggaret in the car got sprayed buy some bustas their was a whole in the head rest of his seat, my 17 birthday some bustas pop the house in he shot in the head agian he was out side with his wife bye the car i seen him hit the ground with his eyes closed but he still living till this day their is an angel with him how can i rap that i just need a start

I have a ? about writing lyrics for a rap?
thats tha biggest lie u dont live in no hood sh.it u dont even kno wats it like
Reply:thats the biggest lie i ever heard in my life. u wasted ur 5 points, but gave me 2 :-). thanks,