Please tell me if you like these lyrics?

do you like this song?


everyday i say im gonna change


i see the rode but cant find the way


too dark to see,hearing your voice i open my eyes, find my way decide to stay.


too bad forever meant nothing


now that im done here


i need another rode


take me on a journey


one person to change my life and show me different


i try and i try but i cant forgive and will never forget


always reminded of you


my journey the rode you took me on


leave me all alone


all scared and cold


one day i said to change and you did it for me


change for good or bad will never be determined


brave for myself now


dont need someone to lean on


you didnt say a word when you left me


make you mad now you would be proud.


never to seem weak the way i live


can you see


can you see beyond my outside


whats underneath my skin


keep shutting you out when you try to break in


was it worth the the fight


did i fit into your plan


not worth to stick around for


nothing to be proud of, wont ever change,she was a mistake.


watch me prove you wro

Please tell me if you like these lyrics?
Try breaking it up into proper stanzas and forming a correct structure. Seems to much like a poem without these two elements.





As for the lyrics themselves, I like the emotion.
Reply:there is just no catchy verse work on it:D





its good though


just needs a catchy verse


that is what makes a good song. !!:]
Reply:yupp there good.





but yehh you need to make the sections clearer,or if its not in verse/chorus make it.





and you shoul be careful posting lyrics on the web. people could steal em :(
Reply:i agree with the others you need a catchy verse