the theme song of the new commercial of skin white
sang by ronnie, the one in PDA
Where can i get the guitar chords or lyrics of Isang saglit, Isang tingin?
i love that song!! heres a copy of the lyrics:
Bigla na lang natulala na para bang bata
Kapag nakakakita ng nahuhulog na tala
Naganap ang lahat sa isang iglap
Chorus:
Isang saglit, Isang tingin
Ba’t ngayon lang napansin
O anong ganda ako ba’y umiibig na?
(SkinWhite commercial after the jump)
Kung pwede lang di pumikit sayang ang sandali
At baka pa makapuslit ang karamyaang umakit
Pwede bang hingin ka sa langit
(Repeat Chorus)
Mundo ko’y umilaw
Biglang luminaw
Pangarap pala’y ikaw
(Repeat Chorus)
Isang saglit, isang tingin
Ito ba’y nadarama mo rin?
Sana ako’y mahalin
Sana ako’y mahalin
.:. if you want to hear the complete song, go to http://blogwerx.net/2007/02/13/sana-akoy...
hindi ako makakita ng guitar chords eh.. pag nakakita ka, sabihin mo ha! ^_^ cheers!
Reply:Hi! One of the song's writers here. The song, along with the lyrics, is posted in my multiply site (www.brickello.multiply.com). I don't have guitar chords though.
mint
Saturday, April 24, 2010
Please tell me if you like these lyrics?
do you like this song?
everyday i say im gonna change
i see the rode but cant find the way
too dark to see,hearing your voice i open my eyes, find my way decide to stay.
too bad forever meant nothing
now that im done here
i need another rode
take me on a journey
one person to change my life and show me different
i try and i try but i cant forgive and will never forget
always reminded of you
my journey the rode you took me on
leave me all alone
all scared and cold
one day i said to change and you did it for me
change for good or bad will never be determined
brave for myself now
dont need someone to lean on
you didnt say a word when you left me
make you mad now you would be proud.
never to seem weak the way i live
can you see
can you see beyond my outside
whats underneath my skin
keep shutting you out when you try to break in
was it worth the the fight
did i fit into your plan
not worth to stick around for
nothing to be proud of, wont ever change,she was a mistake.
watch me prove you wro
Please tell me if you like these lyrics?
Try breaking it up into proper stanzas and forming a correct structure. Seems to much like a poem without these two elements.
As for the lyrics themselves, I like the emotion.
Reply:there is just no catchy verse work on it:D
its good though
just needs a catchy verse
that is what makes a good song. !!:]
Reply:yupp there good.
but yehh you need to make the sections clearer,or if its not in verse/chorus make it.
and you shoul be careful posting lyrics on the web. people could steal em :(
Reply:i agree with the others you need a catchy verse
everyday i say im gonna change
i see the rode but cant find the way
too dark to see,hearing your voice i open my eyes, find my way decide to stay.
too bad forever meant nothing
now that im done here
i need another rode
take me on a journey
one person to change my life and show me different
i try and i try but i cant forgive and will never forget
always reminded of you
my journey the rode you took me on
leave me all alone
all scared and cold
one day i said to change and you did it for me
change for good or bad will never be determined
brave for myself now
dont need someone to lean on
you didnt say a word when you left me
make you mad now you would be proud.
never to seem weak the way i live
can you see
can you see beyond my outside
whats underneath my skin
keep shutting you out when you try to break in
was it worth the the fight
did i fit into your plan
not worth to stick around for
nothing to be proud of, wont ever change,she was a mistake.
watch me prove you wro
Please tell me if you like these lyrics?
Try breaking it up into proper stanzas and forming a correct structure. Seems to much like a poem without these two elements.
As for the lyrics themselves, I like the emotion.
Reply:there is just no catchy verse work on it:D
its good though
just needs a catchy verse
that is what makes a good song. !!:]
Reply:yupp there good.
but yehh you need to make the sections clearer,or if its not in verse/chorus make it.
and you shoul be careful posting lyrics on the web. people could steal em :(
Reply:i agree with the others you need a catchy verse
Trying to find a song with these lyrics?
looking at the beauty of creation
the sunshine is flashing my mind
and i wonder if this could be heaven on earth
so I'm leaving something something behind
Your fingers are twirling through my hair
the tender touch of you on my skin
You make me see flowers everywhere
My new way of life is to begin
and i feel free like a bird of the sea
with you close to me and i feel free like a bird of the sea
with you close to me
Any help would be grateful.
Trying to find a song with these lyrics?
Sing it to me...
sage
the sunshine is flashing my mind
and i wonder if this could be heaven on earth
so I'm leaving something something behind
Your fingers are twirling through my hair
the tender touch of you on my skin
You make me see flowers everywhere
My new way of life is to begin
and i feel free like a bird of the sea
with you close to me and i feel free like a bird of the sea
with you close to me
Any help would be grateful.
Trying to find a song with these lyrics?
Sing it to me...
sage
So what do you think of these lyrics?
My head rests on his chest
and I hear his heart
I hear it speaking, it tells me it is beating
for me.
We are sitting around, talking with friends
drinking beer, watching the game on cable
and I don't think he is thinking of me
until his hand catches mine,
palm to palm, our finger interwoven
under the table
His eyes when he sees me
when he comes to get me
after work
tell me I am more beautiful
than any woman
who has ever walked the earth
At the concert moving together,
having a good time
afterwards when our friends are talking
his eyes meet mine and I know what he is thinking
When I make a joke, he understands it
he never thinks
anything I say or do is foolish
He takes my hands and pulls them in
and wraps them round his heart
and somehow his surrender
pulls my defenses all apart
I don't know how this happened
but somehow here I am
and
my eyes, they miss the sight of him
and my ears strain for his voice and step
and my skin longs for the feel of him,
for his scent, his taste
I ache
So what do you think of these lyrics?
How the heck did you get inside Moonbelle's head and steal a poem intended for me? I am telling!!!
Reply:kl u could get rich
Reply:niceee .
Reply:That was pretty cool. Check out poetry.com for some more inspiration and to chronicle your poems :) They have poetry contests too, and I think this one is worthy.
Reply:good.
i would better judge if i had a melody.
Reply:I'm stealing them. LOL J/K. They are pretty sweet ^_^. Well done
Reply:i love itt :]
you serve a star!
Reply:Very good
Reply:i reallly like it :)
Reply:nice
Reply:HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT OF MAKING POEM BOOKS!?!?! It's amazing. My best poetry has 5 words:
I can't write a poem
lol
Reply:That was very beautiful and moving! You are a great writer.
Reply:nice poem ... as song lyrics? eh not something i would buy
Reply:well I'am a guy so personally it sucks but i have all sisters and they liked it sorta
Reply:there is no rime.. but very touchy.. :) good luck
Reply:It flows more like a poem than a song. Where is the chorus? It needs a hook to keep people's attention...create the hook and you have yourself one hell of a song.
Reply:Righteous
Reply:I've been a musician for all my life and a song writer almost as long. Your lyrics are very good. I like them ......and I tend to be very critical of others' songs
Reply:very nice!!!
you know, you could post it here http://www.deviantart.com
:)
Reply:Honestly, I Thought That Was Horrible..
The Idea; SomeWhat Generic..
And No Flow What-so-Ever.
"We are sitting around, talking with friends
drinking beer, watching the game on cable
and I don't think he is thinking of me"
It Sounds Like poorly Written Folk Lyrics.
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Reply:I liked it as in I do dabble in poetry also.. I loved the words and your feeling as you wrote this. Do something with this..I know its easier said than done. Keep it up..(use a little rhyming in your verses..)
Reply:Lucky guy. Nice poem.
Reply:incredible
and I hear his heart
I hear it speaking, it tells me it is beating
for me.
We are sitting around, talking with friends
drinking beer, watching the game on cable
and I don't think he is thinking of me
until his hand catches mine,
palm to palm, our finger interwoven
under the table
His eyes when he sees me
when he comes to get me
after work
tell me I am more beautiful
than any woman
who has ever walked the earth
At the concert moving together,
having a good time
afterwards when our friends are talking
his eyes meet mine and I know what he is thinking
When I make a joke, he understands it
he never thinks
anything I say or do is foolish
He takes my hands and pulls them in
and wraps them round his heart
and somehow his surrender
pulls my defenses all apart
I don't know how this happened
but somehow here I am
and
my eyes, they miss the sight of him
and my ears strain for his voice and step
and my skin longs for the feel of him,
for his scent, his taste
I ache
So what do you think of these lyrics?
How the heck did you get inside Moonbelle's head and steal a poem intended for me? I am telling!!!
Reply:kl u could get rich
Reply:niceee .
Reply:That was pretty cool. Check out poetry.com for some more inspiration and to chronicle your poems :) They have poetry contests too, and I think this one is worthy.
Reply:good.
i would better judge if i had a melody.
Reply:I'm stealing them. LOL J/K. They are pretty sweet ^_^. Well done
Reply:i love itt :]
you serve a star!
Reply:Very good
Reply:i reallly like it :)
Reply:nice
Reply:HAVE YOU EVER THOUGHT OF MAKING POEM BOOKS!?!?! It's amazing. My best poetry has 5 words:
I can't write a poem
lol
Reply:That was very beautiful and moving! You are a great writer.
Reply:nice poem ... as song lyrics? eh not something i would buy
Reply:well I'am a guy so personally it sucks but i have all sisters and they liked it sorta
Reply:there is no rime.. but very touchy.. :) good luck
Reply:It flows more like a poem than a song. Where is the chorus? It needs a hook to keep people's attention...create the hook and you have yourself one hell of a song.
Reply:Righteous
Reply:I've been a musician for all my life and a song writer almost as long. Your lyrics are very good. I like them ......and I tend to be very critical of others' songs
Reply:very nice!!!
you know, you could post it here http://www.deviantart.com
:)
Reply:Honestly, I Thought That Was Horrible..
The Idea; SomeWhat Generic..
And No Flow What-so-Ever.
"We are sitting around, talking with friends
drinking beer, watching the game on cable
and I don't think he is thinking of me"
It Sounds Like poorly Written Folk Lyrics.
%26gt;%26lt;
Reply:I liked it as in I do dabble in poetry also.. I loved the words and your feeling as you wrote this. Do something with this..I know its easier said than done. Keep it up..(use a little rhyming in your verses..)
Reply:Lucky guy. Nice poem.
Reply:incredible
Can I get some feedback on these lyrics I wrote? Any advice or comments?
Disappear
Kiss me while I touch your back
Everything so smooth I won't hold back
It's raining in your eyes I see...(yeah...)
Kiss your lips as I close my eyes
Smelling every season walk on by
You and me, together we'll be...(perfect)
Grab my hand pretty baby
It's been so long, not lately
I've missed you so much
I've missed you so much
Grab my skin pretty darling
It's no surprise, just a warning
I just wanna kiss you until you disappear....
Tick tock, the clock of love stops
Its time for you to go where you never ever stop
Life is just a running train
Run through my mind and sustain the pain
Kiss me goodbye once more
Disappear and go through that door
Leaving me here all alone to think about how our love will grow...
Can I get some feedback on these lyrics I wrote? Any advice or comments?
i think i would change the part about grabbing the skin that sounds painful
Reply:Sounds pretty good. Only I wouldn't repeat the same rhyming word in two consecutive sentences though.
Reply:I think it's good.
Reply:Practice, practice,practice...I wouldn't quit you day job just yet..,
Reply:I like it, but, I would say, Touch my skin.....it's good tho
Reply:Nice try, however, if you want the truth it sounds quite cheesy! It reminds me of that terrible Marky Mark and the funky bunch song "Make me say Ooh!". Try to be a little bit more mature/deep and cut out all the puppy love/superficial bits.
Reply:is engish your second language? It sounds a bit clumsy to me by some reason. I don't like the "pretty baby" part and "grabbing the skin". She is leaving him, so the last line should be "to think about how our life Would grow"
Don't take me seriously though, i might be wrong because i don't appreciate the style.
Kiss me while I touch your back
Everything so smooth I won't hold back
It's raining in your eyes I see...(yeah...)
Kiss your lips as I close my eyes
Smelling every season walk on by
You and me, together we'll be...(perfect)
Grab my hand pretty baby
It's been so long, not lately
I've missed you so much
I've missed you so much
Grab my skin pretty darling
It's no surprise, just a warning
I just wanna kiss you until you disappear....
Tick tock, the clock of love stops
Its time for you to go where you never ever stop
Life is just a running train
Run through my mind and sustain the pain
Kiss me goodbye once more
Disappear and go through that door
Leaving me here all alone to think about how our love will grow...
Can I get some feedback on these lyrics I wrote? Any advice or comments?
i think i would change the part about grabbing the skin that sounds painful
Reply:Sounds pretty good. Only I wouldn't repeat the same rhyming word in two consecutive sentences though.
Reply:I think it's good.
Reply:Practice, practice,practice...I wouldn't quit you day job just yet..,
Reply:I like it, but, I would say, Touch my skin.....it's good tho
Reply:Nice try, however, if you want the truth it sounds quite cheesy! It reminds me of that terrible Marky Mark and the funky bunch song "Make me say Ooh!". Try to be a little bit more mature/deep and cut out all the puppy love/superficial bits.
Reply:is engish your second language? It sounds a bit clumsy to me by some reason. I don't like the "pretty baby" part and "grabbing the skin". She is leaving him, so the last line should be "to think about how our life Would grow"
Don't take me seriously though, i might be wrong because i don't appreciate the style.
Twilight fans: Listen to this song, the lyrics fit perfectly?
http://www.projectplaylist.com/musicsear...
You don't have to move, you don't have to speak
lips for biting.
you're staring me down, a glance makes me weak
eyes for striking
now I'm twisting up when I'm twisted with you
brush so lightly
and time trickles down, and I'm breathing for two
squeeze so tightly.
I'll be fine, you'll be fine.
this moment seems so long
don't waste now, precious time
we'll dance inside the song
[Chorus]
What makes the one to shake you down?
each touch belongs to each new sound
say now you want to shake me too
move down to me, slip into you
She sinks in my mind as she sheds through her skin
touch sight tastes like fire
hands do now what eyes no longer defend
hands to fuel desire
I'll be fine, you'll be fine
this moment seems so long
don't waste now, precious time
we'll dance inside the song
[Chorus]
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah [x2]
And I'll be fine, you'll be fine
is this fine? I'm not fine
give me pieces, give me things to stay awake (stay awake)
[Chorus x2]
Twilight fans: Listen to this song, the lyrics fit perfectly?
The song "Australia" by The Shins also fits perfectly with the books. It's a bit crazy how well it fits actually. Check out the lyrics! You can email me what you think if you want.
And, yes this song fits well too! After I've read those books (I love them!) it seems like every song fits in some way or another with them.
Reply:Its cool and perfect lol the lyrics go good with it
You don't have to move, you don't have to speak
lips for biting.
you're staring me down, a glance makes me weak
eyes for striking
now I'm twisting up when I'm twisted with you
brush so lightly
and time trickles down, and I'm breathing for two
squeeze so tightly.
I'll be fine, you'll be fine.
this moment seems so long
don't waste now, precious time
we'll dance inside the song
[Chorus]
What makes the one to shake you down?
each touch belongs to each new sound
say now you want to shake me too
move down to me, slip into you
She sinks in my mind as she sheds through her skin
touch sight tastes like fire
hands do now what eyes no longer defend
hands to fuel desire
I'll be fine, you'll be fine
this moment seems so long
don't waste now, precious time
we'll dance inside the song
[Chorus]
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah
Ooo, ah [x2]
And I'll be fine, you'll be fine
is this fine? I'm not fine
give me pieces, give me things to stay awake (stay awake)
[Chorus x2]
Twilight fans: Listen to this song, the lyrics fit perfectly?
The song "Australia" by The Shins also fits perfectly with the books. It's a bit crazy how well it fits actually. Check out the lyrics! You can email me what you think if you want.
And, yes this song fits well too! After I've read those books (I love them!) it seems like every song fits in some way or another with them.
Reply:Its cool and perfect lol the lyrics go good with it
Friday, November 20, 2009
Will you help me improve the lyrics i wrote?
i wrote it about a month ago,so..yeah..:
My life is broken into pieces
of glass shattered on the floor
There is no blood in my body
I can't live this anymore
I'm living this life depressingly
with no one caring about me
There's nothing in this house left to break
My heart is no longer beating
The pain,it goes on,life never stops
you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause
and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin
It's okay, but my future isn't
if only i could go back
and fix all of my mistakes
they've only brought me torture
and more lifeless fakes
have you ever wondered why
you have to live the way you do?
why you were stuck with this
mess that can't fix?
the pain, it goes on (...^^^)
so leave all of your anger and misery
can't you please?
i already have too much to deal with
it's too much stress on me
and why,
why do we break hearts?
why do we kill lives?
can't we all just live peacefully?
you only have one chance at life
i can take harsh comments,too.. i'm aware that it sucks lol
Will you help me improve the lyrics i wrote?
I would recommend removing the 'of' at the beginning of the second line. Try to rephrase or change around the fifth line, it's weak and could be as strong as your previous lines.
the last line of the second stanza, 'it's okay, but my future isn't' it doesn't flow...perhaps change the 'isn't' to 'is not.'
'mess that can't fix?' i'm assuming that you mistakingly left out the 'be' so it's ' a mess that can't be fixed?' it would sound better that way.
other than that, it's excellent. no harsh comments needed, it's great lyrics.
I enjoyed the read.
Gene
Reply:it's good
Reply:I really don't think it sucks. It's pretty good actually. I really don't have any suggestions. But good luck! =)
Reply:i think it's pretty good. i don't have any suggestions. good luck!! :) ♥
Reply:i just have to say that does NOT suck! i think it's a very good creation of yours :)
i think after "the pain, it goes on..." then repeat (well what seems to me to be the chorus) the part:
"The pain,it goes on,life never stops
you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause
and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin
It's okay, but my future isn't"
then continue onto the third verse :)
but hey that's just a suggestion, it's all up to you!
i really like it though. it does not suck! it is very very wonderfully written :)
*hugs*
Reply:No help required, i think you have made your point.
For your next one i would suggest a little less melancholy.
Life is like a cup of tea, it's how you make it!
Reply:That's really good. I don't know how you would change the lyrics. I am not really good with writing songs. Just one question though, is this a soft song or a fast paced song.
Reply:Thats nice
Reply:Wow this is really good!!! Wow
Reply:To me it's too depressing, i like songs which say your depressed but get better or something. but its good if you like that kind of stuff.
Reply:that's good
Reply:Better Than I Expected! I Can Relate To This In So MAny Ways! .......xxxx
alstroemeria
My life is broken into pieces
of glass shattered on the floor
There is no blood in my body
I can't live this anymore
I'm living this life depressingly
with no one caring about me
There's nothing in this house left to break
My heart is no longer beating
The pain,it goes on,life never stops
you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause
and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin
It's okay, but my future isn't
if only i could go back
and fix all of my mistakes
they've only brought me torture
and more lifeless fakes
have you ever wondered why
you have to live the way you do?
why you were stuck with this
mess that can't fix?
the pain, it goes on (...^^^)
so leave all of your anger and misery
can't you please?
i already have too much to deal with
it's too much stress on me
and why,
why do we break hearts?
why do we kill lives?
can't we all just live peacefully?
you only have one chance at life
i can take harsh comments,too.. i'm aware that it sucks lol
Will you help me improve the lyrics i wrote?
I would recommend removing the 'of' at the beginning of the second line. Try to rephrase or change around the fifth line, it's weak and could be as strong as your previous lines.
the last line of the second stanza, 'it's okay, but my future isn't' it doesn't flow...perhaps change the 'isn't' to 'is not.'
'mess that can't fix?' i'm assuming that you mistakingly left out the 'be' so it's ' a mess that can't be fixed?' it would sound better that way.
other than that, it's excellent. no harsh comments needed, it's great lyrics.
I enjoyed the read.
Gene
Reply:it's good
Reply:I really don't think it sucks. It's pretty good actually. I really don't have any suggestions. But good luck! =)
Reply:i think it's pretty good. i don't have any suggestions. good luck!! :) ♥
Reply:i just have to say that does NOT suck! i think it's a very good creation of yours :)
i think after "the pain, it goes on..." then repeat (well what seems to me to be the chorus) the part:
"The pain,it goes on,life never stops
you can't rewind, fast-forward, or pause
and,ohh, the glass punctured in my skin
It's okay, but my future isn't"
then continue onto the third verse :)
but hey that's just a suggestion, it's all up to you!
i really like it though. it does not suck! it is very very wonderfully written :)
*hugs*
Reply:No help required, i think you have made your point.
For your next one i would suggest a little less melancholy.
Life is like a cup of tea, it's how you make it!
Reply:That's really good. I don't know how you would change the lyrics. I am not really good with writing songs. Just one question though, is this a soft song or a fast paced song.
Reply:Thats nice
Reply:Wow this is really good!!! Wow
Reply:To me it's too depressing, i like songs which say your depressed but get better or something. but its good if you like that kind of stuff.
Reply:that's good
Reply:Better Than I Expected! I Can Relate To This In So MAny Ways! .......xxxx
alstroemeria
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